Uncovered! 25 Secret Copywriting Tips
Hiring a copywriter is a small cost relative to the overall costs of a direct mail campaign or building a website. Yet a lot of people still insist on writing their own copy. If you want to do this, here are some ways you can make your copy more persuasive.
- Create an attention-grabbing headline. One of the biggest challenges that any print advertiser faces is getting people to read their ad – let alone for the ad to produce a result. So the main purpose of the headline is to get your reader’s attention. There are no rules – except what works.
- If you don’t know your audience, find out about them. Then visualise someone you already know who fits the target audience and write as if you are writing to them.
- Get to the point. Quickly. An awful lot of copy waffles on before talking about anything of any relevance.
- Use short sentences. The easiest sentence to read is eight words. The average length for easy reading is 16 words. Any sentence longer than 32 words should be cut down – ruthlessly.
- And use short paragraphs. Make sure each paragraph contains only one thought.
- Use simple words that everyone understands, then everyone will understand. Good copy is sometimes criticised for having a child-like quality. This is deliberate; if a simple person can understand it, everyone can understand it.
- Use buckets and chains to link paragraphs. e.g. On the other hand. . ., But there is something else. . ., That is just one example, but. . ., In addition. . ., And this is how it works.
- Turn negatives into positives. E.g. instead of ‘if your pain doesn’t ease, we’ll refund your money” say “You’ll be pain free or we’ll refund your money”.
- DO NOT USE CAPITAL LETTERS TO HIGHLIGHT YOUR IMPORTANT THOUGHTS. CAPITAL LETTERS ARE MUCH HARDER TO READ BECAUSE READERS RECOGNISE WORD SHAPES NOT INDIVIDUAL LETTERS.
- Don’t use three words when one will do. “Now” is better than “At this point in time”.
- Avoid humour. . .unless you are a very good writer (indeed).
- Give authority. E.g. instead of “widely used by major corporations” say, “adopted by Rolls-Royce and Pratt & Whitney”.
- State the facts. Often you can increase the power of your copy by removing comparative and superlative adjectives.
- Relate your story to your reader. E.g. Instead of “Many people must have wondered” say, “I am sure you have wondered”.
- Focus on the benefits the customer will get. His only concern is ‘What’s in it for me?”
- Count the number of times you use the word “you”. The more I talk about “you” the more interested you are in what I am selling. Ideally “you” should occur two to three times more frequently than “we” or “I”.
- Repeat if necessary. Your audience will not mind you saying the same thing several times in a different way.
- Do not overclaim. If you overinflate even one claim you destroy your credibility.
- Speak the reader’s language. The language you use when you write to a school teacher is going to be different to how you write to a builder.
- Mind your Ps and Qs. Be polite. If you want something say please. E.g “to take advantage of this special offer, please call our customer service team on . . .”.
- Space your benefits through the letter. Don’t bunch them up.
- Use a penalty for not acting now. E.g “This offier applies only to the first 100 products we sell…”
- Use a PS. Use it to make a big, powerful point or use it to sum up the sales argument in a compelling way.
- Review your copy. Do it over and over. Six or seven times or more.
- Ask Jenny Hopkins to write your copy for you. She is generally worth the meagre investment. It really is a lot easier to hire a good copywriter. Please send her an email at Muddy Puddle Media.
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